Saturday, March 29, 2014

2013 CRITIQUE WINNERS ANNOUNCED AT MARCH MEETING

Interviews by Buck Morgan
Roger had numerous songs selected as Best of Meeting during monthly 2nd Tuesday programs in 2013. Roger has been an avid supporter of the Dallas Songwriters and is a past-president and former DSA board member, as well as a frequent and sought-after sound engineer. Lately, Roger has been breaking the ReverbNation top 10 local charts for Americana. Keep up the good work, Roger.

The award is named after the late Vern Dailey. Though well known among Dallas Songwriters as the all-time record holder for Songwriter of the Year and as a fantastic lyricist and world class curmudgeon, Vern is probably best remembered as the puppeteer partner of the long-running Dallas children's program from the 70s to the 90s, Peppermint Place. He was Muffin the Bear and many other characters who supported the late Jerry Haynes, better known as Mr. Peppermint. We miss you every day, Vern, you rascal.

In an interview with DSA, Roger shared some songwriting wisdom.


 1Q: Who is your favorite songwriter? What is it about these songwriters that attracts you?
I grew up listening to classic country every morning before schoolCharley Pride always stood out from the crowdThen, the Beatles invasion and Elvis Presley were larger than lifeI also include Neil Diamond and Bobby Goldsboro in my list along with Tommy JamesAs times changed I added Carole King, James Taylor, and Carly SimonAnd of course there was Jimi Hendrix and Jim Morrison.

2Q: When is a good time for you to write songsWhen happy? Sad?
I write good sad songs when I am between relationshipsA good breakup song or You Done Me Wrong song can usually emerge from a breakupI am an observer of peopleI write about things I see and things people do, but I also sometimes get inspired listening to others musicians play and write something that I heard as part of a songI explore a topic another songwriter has openedIf I hear music without words, I sometimes feel words in the music and write those to fit the music.

3Q: Are your songs typically personal and from your own experience?
Again, I am an observer of life and peopleSome of my songs are personal but edited for public consumption, but often, my songs are observations that lead me down a pathSometimes, my imagination takes me down a “what if” pathI may see a couple, for example, and think, what if they just met and they are exploring a relationship, and I build a scenario to fit where my mind takes me, but with a dose of reality.

4Q: You have much experience with co-writers. What makes a good co-write?
The biggest things that I look for in co-writers is that they have skills that compliment mine and that they are open to ideasI dont fancy myself as a performer, so I look for people that like to perform and sing and play wellCo-writes take many avenuesI am not always in the room with my co-writersWe may connect via email or Skype, for example.

5Q: Is there someone at the DSA youd like to co-write with?
I am open to co-write with many peopleI constantly come up with hooks and ideas that may fit one persons writing style better than anotherI use my observation skills to try and understand a co-writers, or potential co-writers, style and influence.

6Q: What is the hardest part of songwriting? What is the easiest part?
Words come to me easilyOpening up my mind and letting the words flow through me feels naturalEditing and giving a song an interesting story line and powerful lyrical message are more difficultThe most difficult is putting the words to musicI have to find a way to communicate the musical production and riffs I hear in my head to players to help them understand what my take is on the arrangement and production.

 7Q: When did you know that you wanted to write songs? What prepared you to write songs?
I have written songs and poems for most of my lifeI did not fully take advantage of songwriting until after my divorceI had the means and the time to write, so I submersed myself into music and songwritingI have done sound production and recording for years, but often times people dont think of the sound guy as a songwriterAs a sound guy, I have things that I have to pay attention to in a mix, which I think sometimes helps me in arrangement and productionI can hear different instruments fall back into a mix and emergeSound engineers and recording engineers need to know how to balance instruments so that all of the instruments are not competing for limited bandwidthIn that I am primarily a lyricist, I find words to use and instrumental mixes that support the lyrics rather than bury them behind a wall of musicSometimes the lyrics are the important part of the song, and sometimes the musical hook is what needs to be prominent.

 8Q: If you could give advice to someone in the DSA who wanted to become a better songwriter, what would it be?
People who want to be great songwriters need to expose themselves to other songwritersTake advantage of opportunities to network with other songwriters and make use of workshops and development exercisesRead and listen and observe.

The late Vern Dailey was named Dallas Songwriter a record four times, maybe more, who knows. He was short, shy, vain, funny, poeticin short, a real stinker, and we miss him every 2nd Tuesday of the month.


BROOKE MALOUF, ERIC ROBERTS WIN SONG OF YEAR 2013

Dallas producer and musician Pete Miller has weighed the evidence and judged "'Til Love Comes Back" as Dallas Songwriters Song of the Year.   DSA had a chance to find out what makes this winning songwriter stand out in this interview with
 Brooke Malouf

1Q: Who are your favorite songwriters
I have manyTwo of my favorites are Allen Shamblin and Tom Douglas.
                       
What makes these songwriters special to you?
They write from the heart.

2Q: What inspired Til Love Comes Back”?
I love the idea that anything, no matter how hard, can be reconciled.

Is it a personal song?
Its a song that most people can relate to.
           
Typically, are your songs personal?
Sometimes yes, but ideas come from everywhere.
           
 3Q: Do you always write with a co-writer?
 Almost always
           
What makes for a good co-write?
Leaving the ego at the door and forgetting it for a while, and enjoying the moment.
           
What do you avoid in a co-writer?
 I'm not sure, but what works for me is collaboration.
           
What advice would you give to someone who wants to co-write?
Find someone you really connect with, and waittil you find that right matchAlso, you won't always be able to write with everyone you meet, and that's okay, too. Hopefully, youll find the handful of writers you love writing with.

4Q: Was there something different or unusual about writing Til Love Comes Back”?
This was the second song Eric and I had written together
           
What are you most proud of in this song?
I wrote this with a great writer, Eric RobertsI think we would both agree that we are proud of the fact that this song feels real to both of us.
           
Is it a sad song or optimistic?
BothIts about a rough time, but its also about the idea that almost anything can be reconciled

5Q: Past or present, are there Dallas Songwriters you admire?
Tom Douglas, Scott Sean White, Bob Paterno, Ed Williams and a lot of the writers I have met at the DSA.



DALLAS SONGWRITERS SONG OF THE YEAR

TIL LOVE COMES BACK
© Brooke Malouf and Eric Roberts

I heard the click of the door, and I know what it meant
Cause walking out sounds so different than trying again
An earthquake of memories comes rushing back at me
An ocean of hurt so deep, I just cant swim

CHORUS
But just when you think its the end, well
Thats where the road begins again, and
These twists will turn until we laugh
Cause these things meant to cut us down can
Change and turn our hearts right around and
It can happen just like that
So baby look back, ‘cause Im waving my white flag
Til love comes back

They say one day at a time, but I say breath by breath
Cause youve been my one since the day we met
The sun drops in front of me, and I feel half of what I use to be
Standing on the front porch with my regrets

CHORUS

BRIDGE
Cant we give us another try?
I never meant us to say goodbye
And our forevers not over yet
No, our forevers not over yet

CHORUS

It'll come back
We will come back
We will come back


At the March meeting, Pete brought the results of the Best of Meeting competition--the winner among the winners of our monthly member critique sessions--giving the award to the song co-written by Brooke Malouf and Eric Roberts. Below are the winners and Pete's comments. Soon we'll provide a link so that you can hear the songs on our web site.

1st Place Winner and Dallas Songwriters Song of the Year--
'"Til Love Comes Back" by Brooke Malouf and Eric Roberts
This song just comes across like it didn’t take much effort – flowed honestly from a feeling and not forced or contrived. The lyric has emotional and visual elements. The form is near perfect – maybe it could be shortened just a bit without compromising anything.

Runner Up: "What You Got" by Andy Schrumpf
This is a very relevant contemporary country song. Really strong hook even though it repeats quite a bit, it still holds up. The lyrics, and how they tell the story are very clever – the perspective also allows for repeating. Musically, I especially like that the verses have some good fire in them. I do think there is room for a quick bridge in between the last two choruses – a couple of trick lines that could solidify the story even more.

3. "Wait For Tomorrow" by Barbe McMillen & Laurie Windham
I interpret this as an obvious musical theater piece. The form is appropriate for that genre. I visualize performers on the stage singing and dancing supporting the lead, but the song is also listenable without the stage presentation. I might suggest a change of the fifth line of the chorus to make it less repetitive of the second line, just to vary it some. The melody sits nicely on top of the rocking rhythm and chord changes. Very jubilant.

4. "Here I Am" by Mary Guthrie
This song has a great “prayerful” feeling with beautiful visuals to help create that feeling. The message is simple but very explicit. The form flows real well for this tune, though I might suggest the instrumental vary somewhat from the intro. The melody floats above the moving, well voiced, chord changes. The hook is not perceived as original but it is very fitting.

5. "Sunset In September" by Alex Gorodiscas, Roger Russell, Robin Willis and Kevin Moore
Nice emotional and very visual song. Good lyrics and hook. The melody is also nice, supported by solid chord progressions. I would prefer a quick turnaround after the first chorus to set up the second verse. That said, with the running time a little long, I would suggest shortening the bridge. I think you could accomplish the reveal – message – of that bridge in three lines rather than six, and it could make it even more powerful.


For more of Pete's comments on Song of the Year, click here: http://bestsongsofthemeeting.blogspot.com/


2013 GRAND PRIZE WINNER Jay Gallagher is Grand Prize winner and 2nd runner up in 2013 Song Contest


After winning 1st place in the Pop/Rock/RnB/Alt category in Dallas Songwriters Association international song contest, Gallagher’s “I Believe” won out over the top three winners from each of the contest’s eight categories.

“Because the melody is so engaging and the words work so well with it, you can pretty much sing this song from the first listen.” said Roy Elkins, grand prize judge and CEO of Broadjam.com, an online community and resource for musicians. Additionally Elkins says “Great work by this writer and dead center in today’s pop market.” To read all of the judges comments on this and other songs, refer to http://dsasongcontest.blogspot.com/p/grand-prize-judge-roy-elkins-comments.html
Gallaghers song, “3, 2, 1” also garnered a nod from the Grand Prize Judge taking 2nd runner up. Elkins says, “This is and excellent Techno piece of music and since the lyric refers to dancing, I am sure DJs around the world would love to have this in their platlists.”

Jay Gallagher (James Hayden Gallagher) alias Jay+Tonic is a composer, producer, DJ, and award-winning songwriter. His genres include Pop, Electro House, Dance, and Electropop.
A classically trained cellist living outside of Philadelphia, PA., Jay began playing the cello at age four and as a twelve year old was accepted into Temple University's Center for Gifted Young Musicians, studying under Metta Watts. An amateur classical composer through high school, it was not until college that he began exploring the realm of electronic music. Having been dubbed the "Bach of electronic dance" (Jon Gordon, former musical director for Suzanne Vega and Madonna), Jay draws from and combines his classical roots with cutting-edge sound design and production techniques to create detailed  compositions. His music has sat atop charts on highly regarded music websites, like Broadjam.com, is being featured in multiple advertisement and promotional videos, and has been accepted into premier music licensing libraries for its fresh and current musical style.


Philly's Jay + Tonic wins Grand Prize - Aussie is Runner Up


Aussie Rick Webster garnered the 1st runner up prize with “Looking Glass” which took first place in the Instrumental/Easy Listening category. Elkins praised the composition, saying, “I do believe this would be well received in the jazz marketplace as it has all of the songwriting elements that make a great jazz piece.”

Rick Webster is a Guitarist/Composer from Perth, Western Australia. He was the Grand Prize winner for Jazz in the International John Lennon Songwriting Contest 2012. After graduating from the Academy of Performing arts with both a Bachelor in Jazz Music and an Advanced Diploma of Contemporary music, Rick has gone on to become one of the hardest working guitarists in Perth working most nights of the week in all styles from solo jazz guitar to larger groups playing rock, funk, soul, pop, hip hop and other contemporary styles.
Besides performing In a variety of groups, Rick is also an experienced pit musician performing in musicals around Perth as well as performing with The Perth Symphony Orchestra for large performances across Australia as well as throughout New Zealand and Asia.
His first EP release “Rick Webster” in 2011, was a culmination of his many influences and years of Jazz training. It earned him 2 WAM nominations for best Jazz act and Jazz song of the year 2012. His latest release of soul/R&B vocal tracks was released in July 2012 and draws on Rick’s love of contemporary soul music combined with melodic guitar work.
To hear samples of his work please visit the media and store section of his website to see and hear Rick in a variety of different settings from acoustic and jazz to rock and a variety of contemporary styles. Both his EP’s are available in the “Store” section of his website: http://rick-webster.com/